纠正一下这篇英语文章中的错误
IwanttodosomethingfortheExpo
“Bettercity,betterlife”thissloganshowseveryonethattheWorldExpo2010ShanghaiChinawillbeheldsuccessful.IfIcanhavegreathonorofshowingeveryoneShanghai’sbigchanges,lwillmakeamagazinefortheShanghaiWouldExpo.ThismagazinewillincludeShanghai’sculture,localsnakesandsomewonderfulplaceseverybodyshouldvisitliketheorientalpearlTVtower,JinmaoBuildingandsoon.IwillalsobriefreadersonsomeknowledgeaboutWouldExpo.IsurepeoplewillbeamazedbyShanghai’smoderntechnologyandalonghistoryoftheExpo.
IwanttodosomethingfoetheExpoalthoughlamjustaneveryman.IhopeShanghaiwillbemoreandmorestronginthefuture.
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