帮我检查以下初三英语作文有什么语法错误的地方.
DearLiHong,
Iamreallysorrytohearthatyouquarreledwithoneofyourcalssmates.Iknowyouwanttogetonwellwithyourcalssmates.Now,Igivesomesuggestionstoyou.First,youshouldkeepagoodmoodanddon'tangryeasily.Second,ifyourcalssmatesintrouble,youshouldhelpthem.Third,youneedtocollaboratewithothers.Fourth,trytobefriendlytoothers.Finaly,alwayshaveatalkwithyourcalssmatesandtellyourthoughttothem.
Iamsureyouwillgetonwellwithyourclassmatessoon.
Yours,
Emily.
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