大家看看这段文字有没有什么语法问题帮我纠正一下
实在没分了..见谅我要去参加面试
Dearjudges:
Mynameis…,andIam25yearsold.Ihavegraduatedfromavocationalschool,butnowIamstudyinghardtogetthebachelordegree.
Iusedtobeawebpagedesignerinalargenetworkcompany,whichrequiresasenseofself-confidenceandaworkingattitudeofperseverance.Andaftertrainingmyselfsohard,IthinkIhavegainedthesequalities,andtheywillbecomeoneofmyadvantagesoverotherexcellentcompetitors.
AndI,now,growupwithanextrasenseofresponsibilityandmaturityafterseveralyearsofexperience.IbelievethatIcanexpressmypersonalityandshowmyabilityallthemorewhileworkinginyourcompany,anddealwiththechallengesinmywork.
Asformydailylife,Idohaveawiderangeofhobbies,suchassinging,basketballandswimming.Besides,Iamkeenonorganizingextraactivitiesformyfriends,andenjoymyselfalot.
Iamfullyconvincedthatinthefuture,Iwillcontinuetostudytoimprovemyself.Whilegraspingmoreprofessionalknowledge,Iwillenhancemymoralstandardaswell,beingalaw-observerandanuprightperson.Inaword,Iwillsparenoefforttobeaqualifiedemployee.
Thankyouforlistening.
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