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5555~雅思大作文,请狠批!求意见,下月考试,本人水平在6-7分间游荡.空运果蔬Topic:Airtransportisincreasinglyusedtoexportsometypesoffruitsandvegetablestocountrieswherethoseplantscannotgroworareoutofseason.

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5555~雅思大作文,请狠批!求意见,下月考试,本人水平在6-7分间游荡.

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Topic:Airtransportisincreasinglyusedtoexportsometypesoffruitsandvegetablestocountrieswherethoseplantscannotgroworareoutofseason.Somesayitisagoodthing,butothersconsiderthisuseoftransportcannotbejustified.Whatdoyouthink?

Itisquitecommonforcompaniesintheworldtotransportfruitsandvegetablestoothercountriesinpresent-daysociety.Yetthereremainssomedisagreementastowhetherornotthistrendhasbeennegative.Whiletherearecertainlyvalidargumentstothecountry,Ifirmlybelievethatthebenefitsofairtransportnowfaroutweighitsdrawbacks.

Obviously,itisanundeniablefactthatairtransporthasimprovedthelivingstandardsofindividuals.Firstofall,thecatersforthebasicdemandsofconsumerswhodesiretotastediverseseasonalfruitsandvegetablesindifferenttimeoftheyearwhichisratherunimaginableandunachievableinearlytimes.Inthemeantime,thistrendisinthebestinterestoffarmers.Specifically,theirexcessivefarmproductscanbeexportedtootherregionsorevenotherdestinationcountriessincemarketplacesarenolongerrestrictedbythegeographicalbarriers.

Equallyimportant,deliveringcommoditieslikefruitsandvegetablesbetweendifferentareasboostslocaleconomy.Actually,thetransportmethodofplanesplaysavitalroleintheeconomicprosperityinthesweepingtrendofglobalizstion.Becauseofthisbusinessinstitives,wecanhaveourincomeincreasedaswellasefficientlyandreasonablydeployresources.Inotherwords,Iwouldbehard-pressedtoimaginewhatthedomestictradewouldbelikewithouttheassistanceofairtraffic.

Admittedly,theenormouscontaminationproblemswhichcanbeattributedtoairtransport.ThecarbonemissionsthatdischargedbyaircraftsarepredictedasoneofthemajorsourcesoftheglobalwarmingbasedonascientificresearchofCambridgeUniversity.Itmaysoundtooincredible.Butitisaarguablytruth,andforthisreason,Ihavetoadmitthatwhileconstantusageofairplanesisbeneficialintheshortterm,itlong-terminfluencesaregenerallynegative.

Nevertheless,wecannotdenythisvehicleimmediatelyasitisreallyirreplaceablean

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　　本人观点如下（仅供参考）：　　1.整体写的挺不错的.赞一个. 　　2.有些可能是笔误：　　（1）第1段：本人认为在toothercountries之前可以增加fromtheircountry,另外不知道作者用valid主要想表达什么意思；　　（2）第2段：“thecatersfor...inearlytimes.”能否改为“itcatersforthebasicneedofconsumerswhodesiretotastefruitsandvegetableswhicharenotinseasonandwhichhavebeenratherunimaginableandunachievableatearlytime.”；　　（3）第3段：globalizstion应该为globalization；sweepingtrend有出处的吧?我好想没查到啊. 　　（4）第4段：第一句改为句子更好些.theenormouscontaminationproblems个人认为改为thegreatcontaminationproblems更好些；institives是不是incentive啊?“...aswellasefficientlyandreasonablydeployresources.”能否改为“andtheresourcesefficientlyandreasonablyallocated”? 　　（5）第5段：“asthetheshort-distancetransport,”似乎应该为“fortheshort-distancetransport,”,否则不合逻辑.最后再加一句“Butifthereisalongdistance...”之类的句子会更好些. 　　个人意见,仅供参考.