谁能帮我改改我的英语日记我在学英文,这是我写的日记,我知道英文肯定错了很多,谁能帮我改改.日,刚醒,躺在床上,看看窗外,天灰蒙蒙的,黄昏?黎明?睡的时候是下午1点多吧,我都30个小时没睡
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谁能帮我改改我的英语日记
我在学英文,这是我写的日记,我知道英文肯定错了很多,谁能帮我改改.
日,刚醒,躺在床上,看看窗外,天灰蒙蒙的,黄昏?黎明?睡的时候是下午1点多吧,我都30个小时没睡了,才5个钟头就又醒了,又或者我睡了17个钟头?只是不想起床.小孩吵闹的从窗外路过,是下课了?还是去上学的路上?听见拉铁折门的声音,是早餐店开门了?还是夜宵店开门了?想着想着,又睡着了~
再醒来,天还是灰蒙蒙的.
Oneday,Ijustwokeupinbed,therewasgrayishskiesoutsidethewindow,dusk?dawn?whenIsleptatabout13:00Iwasgone30hourswithoutsleep,Ijustgot5hours'sleep?orIhadsleepingfor17hours?justdon'tfeelliketurning.noisypupilpassedby,theywereonthewayhomefromschooloronthewaytoschool?Iheardthesoundfromtheroll-updoor,ashopwasopen,theshopsoldbreakfastorsupper?Idroppedintosleepagain.
WhenIwokeupagain,therewasgrarishoutsidethewindow.
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Oneday,Ijustwokeupinbed,Theskylookedalittlegrayoutsideofthewindow,Isitdusknowordawn?whenIsleptatabout13:00Ihadgone30hourswithoutsleep,Ihavejustgot5hourssleep?orHaveIsleepedfor17hours?Istillfeelverysleepyandwanttosleepmore.Childrenplayedandlaughedoutsidethewindow,walkingtheirwayAretheybackhomeoronthewaytoschool?Iheardthenoiseoftheirondooropened,Wasthelittlerestaurantwhichsoldbreakfastoreveningcakesbegintodoitsbusiness?Withthiskindofthoughtinmymind.Idroppedintosleepagain.
WhenIwokeupagain,Theskystilllookedalittlegrayoutsidethewindow
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