看一下这作文有什么错误的地方?
YesterdaywasLucy'sbrithday.Jimperformedmugictricks.Lilyreciteapoem.Janedidn'tdancethedisco,butsheperformballet.Mariaplaytheguitar.Annsangasongattheparty.Thispartywasverywonderful.Theyhadagoodtime.
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