Onepossibleversion:Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthis.Somestudentssayyes.Theyexpresstheirreasonsasfollows.Firstly,theInternetcanhelpthemmakevariousfriends.Secondly,theycanexpresstheirfeelingsandthoughtsfreely.Besides,chattingonlineisalsohelpfulforourlanguagestudy.However,otherstudentshavetheoppositeview.Theyhavetheirownreasons.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Inaddition,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.Inmyopinion,studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus./Frommypointofview,makingonlinefriendsisnotabadthingifwe’recarefulenough.Anyway,Internetwidensoureyesandenrichesourknowledge.However,weshouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeonitandsometimesbecarefulwiththepeoplewechatwith.Onlyinthiswaycanmakingonlinefriendsbevaluabletous. 　　这是一篇议论文，第一段赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段是反对学生网上交友观点，第三段是表述作者自己的观点。第一段陈述赞同的理由时作者用了Firstly,Secondly,theycanexpresstheirfeelingsBesides,来连接，是文章有层次，并且很流畅。第二段是反对的人的观点和他们的理由，作者没有重复第二段的方法而是用了inaddition来过渡。第三段是作者自己的观点，范文中用Inmyopinion/Frommypointofview来表达自己的观点，观点明确，还有自己的令人信服的理由。一篇好的作文要做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误，熟练运用好的词组。例如asfollows、awasteoftimegetcheated、Asforfriendship和widensoureyesandenrichesourknowledge.都用了我们学过的重点短语另外这篇文章里的好句型也是亮点，例如：chattingonlineisalsohelpfulforourlanguagestudy./Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfully/Onlyinthiswaycanmakingonlinefriendsbevaluabletous.熟练正确的使用这些句型能体现考生的水平，也会给自己的文章加分。