Hello!My name is Gan xirui, My English name is Libby.I Meghit. I come from Ma Jiang xing shan primary school.I׳m in Class Two, Grade five.I,m a Chinese boy. I l ike English very much . There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I''I have a happy family.I love my family.Now l''ll talk about my hometown to you.My hometown is in Ma jiang. lt''s a beautiful place. lt has many tall buildings and wide streets . There are trees and fowers everywhere. There is a Qing Shui Jiang River and Shui Luo Tan Wany people come to visit them every year. The people here are very friendly and helpful, l love my hometown very much,too.Weicome to my hometown—ma jiang, gui zhou! l think you''ll like it名师点评：小作者的英语习作能力很不错哦，但是单词之间应该有间距哦，这样让读者看起来更容易明白哦。另外，小作者也要注意下段落的划分哦。（学乐中国特聘教师：邵喜莲老师）2009-12-31 12:18:00