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10.24考雅思帮忙看看这篇作文能打几分当今社会家庭成员之间的沟通越来越少,DoyouagreeordisagreeIncontemporarysociety,thetempooflifegoesfaster,andpressurescomewiththefastlife,supportfromfamiliesisindisp
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10.24考雅思帮忙看看这篇作文能打几分

当今社会家庭成员之间的沟通越来越少,Doyouagreeordisagree

Incontemporarysociety,thetempooflifegoesfaster,andpressurescomewiththefastlife,supportfromfamiliesisindispensableforeveryone,butsomeonewouldarguewiththis.Thesituationmaybejustopposite.

Thepaceofmodernlifeisincreasingrapidly,homeseemstobethelastandonlyplacewherepressurescannotreach.Peoplewanttohaveacomfortablechatwithfamilymembers,complainthebusydaytheuhavehad,andhopefamiliescouldsupportthembehindtheirback.Familiesshouldhelpthemtorelease,listentothecomplain,basically,haveagoodtimewithothers.Inidealsituation,therewillbeaharmonyfamily,butthetruthsometimegoestoanotherway.

Infact,allfamilymemberswanttobesupportedbyothers,butseldom

arereallysuppotive.InChinamostparentsoffamiliesarebothhavetowork,andtheyallhavetheirownproblems.Whennoonewanttobelistener,thereisalwaysconflicts,thebestwaytoavoidthiskindofconflict,theyalwayschoose,isnottocommunicateeachother.Andthepressuresdonotcomefromoutsideworldonly,someofthesecomefromfamily.Parentshopetheirchildtobebetterandworkhardwhentheyouthwanttohaveabreakafterallschoolstuff,ahusbandwanttowatchafootballgameafterareallylongdaywhilehiswife,alsohadatoughday,needhishelptodosomehouseholdchores,communicationdoesnotgowell,andalways,afterabadcommunication,thereisnocommunication.

Tosumup,wearetruelynotcommunicatewithfamilymemberstoomuchnoeadays,wewantto,butwedonothandleitwell.

我是新人,能给的分不多,请大家多包涵

吕子安回答:
  觉得你的观点写的不错   但是语法和措辞很值得推敲   分数应该是在5.5-6分之间   但是如果单词和句子之间能够润色和修改下的   到6.5-7也是有可能的
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